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? ? 2020年雅思口語新題型：發(fā)出噪音的人或物
Describe someone or something that made a lot of noise 發(fā)出噪音的人或物
You should say:
◆ Who or what made the noise
◆ What the noise was like
◆ What you did when you heard the noise
And how you feel about it
【Sample Answer高分答案】
When you live a busy city life, you will enjoy a quiet place to relax. I often like to go outdoors to read a book, take a walk, or have coffee by myself. ?Though I live in downtown, I am lucky to have some quiet city parks nearby where I can enjoy a bit of peace and quiet.
One of those parks that I adore is not too big but full of trees. There are small benches along the roads and a stream goes through the park. I can see couples sitting on the benches laughing, though I cannot hear what they‘re laughing about. What I can hear the most, are the chirping of birds and the sound of water, since everything is so quiet here. It is so pleasant that it becomes one of my favorite places in the city. However, this impression didn’t last very long. On a workday afternoon, I happened to pass through this park, and I couldn’t help but notice there was some loud music in the air though I couldn’t see where they were coming from. After a couple turns, I realized they came from multiple sources. On one side of the park, there were people singing out loud with speakers. On another side of the park, there were people dancing together with music coming out of speakers as well! ?Since they all used loud speakers, there was nowhere you could hide without hearing those music! If you have to ask my opinion, I would say those music could have sounded pretty nice on a normal day. But when they broke the peace of a park and colliding with each other, it only gave me headaches and I got out of the park as soon as I could.
I know a park is for people to enjoy and I understand people enjoy themselves differently. But please, don’t make so much noise! Because sound is a difficult thing to control - once you have it, it will reach everywhere! Those making the noise might as well take the whole park for themselves! I hope some solutions can come out to have this resolved, and therefore others like me can still have a quiet, outdoor place!
【Brainstorming思路拓展】
1.想一個(gè)吵的環(huán)境， 想想誰或者什么東西發(fā)出了噪音，影響了環(huán)境。 或者也可以想一件事情 - 在什么情況下，誰或者什么東西發(fā)出了噪音，影響了這件事情。
2.如果是描述環(huán)境，可以描述平時(shí)環(huán)境如何、之前環(huán)境如何，后來什么原因另它變吵了，你是怎么發(fā)現(xiàn)它變吵了。
3.如果描述的是一個(gè)事情，注意說出事情的起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果。
【思路解析】
1.Introduction : 聊聊自己一般的習(xí)慣, 比如說一般喜歡安靜，一般喜歡去什么地方。如果下面的事情比較復(fù)雜，這里可以一筆帶過，直接進(jìn)入主題。
2.我這里選擇描述一個(gè)環(huán)境。先說環(huán)境原本如何，然后轉(zhuǎn)入一個(gè)親身經(jīng)歷，用親身經(jīng)歷來開展如何發(fā)現(xiàn)這個(gè)噪音，從而自然地引出who made it, what it sounds like, and how I feel這些內(nèi)容。
3.如果選擇說一件事情，注意也要先說環(huán)境 - 本來是安靜的，之后什么東西出現(xiàn)或者什么狀況發(fā)生了，打破了安靜。
4.雖然對(duì)于噪音的feeling當(dāng)場(chǎng)可以很直觀，但也可以在最后把這種feeling升華成一個(gè)想法或者思考，給你的論述增加深度。
【Language bits高分表達(dá)】
peace and quiet: 清凈
this impression didn’t last very long： 這個(gè)印象沒有持續(xù)很久
collide：碰撞
If you have to ask my opinion： 如果你一定要問我的意見
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