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Part2
得過(guò)的—種病?? ? ? ?媽耶看到題目瞬間懵逼! ! ! !
什么病
什么時(shí)候得的你覺(jué)得怎么樣
Part3
現(xiàn)代人是不是容易得病哪些人容易得病
懵逼了就記住這幾個(gè)題目了
作為新年首封，我監(jiān)測(cè)到了疑似的一道略顯變態(tài)的part 2話題《得過(guò)的一種病》。
這道題來(lái)自江陰機(jī)考考生。雖然我無(wú)法確定這道題之后真的是否會(huì)出現(xiàn)，但它也是一個(gè)很好的學(xué)習(xí)案例，只有你從本質(zhì)上了解了解題思路，你才可以hold住任何一道新題。
當(dāng)我們拿到一道新題后，請(qǐng)先不要思考我究竟曾經(jīng)得過(guò)什么病。我們先來(lái)明確這道題的關(guān)鍵詞，也就是“病 (illness/disease)”。
確定關(guān)鍵詞的目的就是為了進(jìn)一步明確它的拓展方向有哪一些？提前明確細(xì)節(jié)拓展方向可以幫助我們更好的規(guī)劃整道題的內(nèi)容走向。
現(xiàn)在我們就可以就“病 (illness/disease)”來(lái)進(jìn)行維度拆分：
Type 類型
我會(huì)將“illness”分為“身體疾?。╬hysical illness）”和“心理疾病（mental disease）”兩部分。
身體疾病就是出現(xiàn)在人身體的各個(gè)部位，從頭到腳，從皮膚到內(nèi)臟均可，比如：skin disease 皮膚病/ heart disease 心臟病/ stomach illness 胃病/ migraines 偏頭痛/ obesity 肥胖癥等；
心理疾病多為壓力情緒引起的疾病，包括：depression 抑郁癥/ bipolar disorder 情感雙向障礙/ manic 狂躁癥/ anxiety ?焦慮癥/ insomnia 失眠/ claustrophobia 幽閉癥。
Symptoms 癥狀
受單詞局限，癥狀會(huì)是比較難闡述的一類。面對(duì)較難的角度時(shí)，我們需要學(xué)會(huì)放過(guò)自己，同時(shí)不要給出過(guò)于專業(yè)的內(nèi)容，更多的只是“general”的描述，
比如：心理疾病可能引起的癥狀為眩暈“dizziness”/ 食欲不振“l(fā)oss appetite”/ 情緒低落“in low spirits”/ 疲倦“fatigue”等；身體疾病可能引起的癥狀為疼痛“ache”/ 呼吸不暢“hard to breath”/ 虛弱“weak”等。
Popularity 受歡迎程度
“popularity”這一角度幾乎存在于所有雅思part 2話題，除了部分事件類話題。針對(duì)“病癥”，我們依舊可以考慮它的“流行度”。比如，冠狀病毒就是一個(gè)傳染度很高的疾病，但有些疾病則很罕見(jiàn)，只有少數(shù)人才有。為此，你可以思考一下你得的這個(gè)病是高發(fā)的還是就只有少部分人得了。
History 歷史
病也是有歷史的，有些是很早就有的，有些則是新出來(lái)的，比如新冠。出現(xiàn)的時(shí)間長(zhǎng)短會(huì)決定治療的難易程度。
Origins 來(lái)源
有些病是專門在某些國(guó)家才有的，比如dengue 登革熱就是出現(xiàn)在熱帶地區(qū)的，其他地方就很少會(huì)得。你可能患上這種病就是因?yàn)槿チ四骋粺釒?guó)家。
Cost 費(fèi)用
有些病的治療費(fèi)用可以“cost you an arm and a leg”(很貴)，有些則不需要怎么花錢或者就可以自愈。如果你有為這個(gè)病花了很多錢，你可以聊一聊它貴的原因以及這些錢你最終是怎么付的，自己付還是用醫(yī)保來(lái)承擔(dān)，或者家人直接幫你付了。對(duì)于讀書(shū)的學(xué)生而言，有些時(shí)候不敢生病也是因?yàn)榭床?huì)花費(fèi)掉部分的生活費(fèi)。
Duration 持續(xù)時(shí)間
不同的病需要不同的周期來(lái)治愈，有些短短幾天，有些長(zhǎng)達(dá)幾年。不管多久，它一定會(huì)對(duì)你的生活產(chǎn)生一定的影響。為此，你也可以聊一聊在得病期間你的個(gè)人感受是怎么樣的，煎熬還是麻木了？
Treatment 治療
治療方式包括開(kāi)刀、吃藥以及保守治療。你在闡述過(guò)程中可以體現(xiàn)一個(gè)主次或者時(shí)間線變化。有些病需要多種方式進(jìn)行聯(lián)合治療，有些則會(huì)根據(jù)你的不同階段有不一樣的治療方案。比如：我之前因?yàn)榛迨炙嗔?，醫(yī)生說(shuō)如果一個(gè)星期后我的骨頭發(fā)生位移，我就需要做手術(shù)，如果沒(méi)有則只需要綁繃帶即可。
When 什么時(shí)候會(huì)得
有些病是季節(jié)性的，它只會(huì)在專門某一個(gè)季節(jié)的時(shí)候出現(xiàn)，比如花粉過(guò)敏；有些則一年四季都會(huì)有。如果它是有季節(jié)性的，我們又可以聊一聊這一季節(jié)會(huì)出現(xiàn)這一病癥的原因。比如，在我大學(xué)期間，我得了帶狀皰疹。這個(gè)病會(huì)刺激脊椎神經(jīng)，為此你也會(huì)痛的睡不著覺(jué)。這個(gè)病主要出要在春天的時(shí)候，因?yàn)槿f(wàn)物復(fù)蘇所以病毒也相對(duì)較多。
Who 什么人會(huì)得
病也是分人得的。有些病專挑免疫力低下的人，有些則是按年齡來(lái)看的。不過(guò)它的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)也會(huì)發(fā)生變化，比如：心梗，過(guò)往都是年紀(jì)大的人得的，但現(xiàn)在卻開(kāi)始出現(xiàn)在年輕人中間。
How often 得病頻率
有些病你得過(guò)一次就不會(huì)再得，比如：水痘；但有些則會(huì)反復(fù)，比如：感冒，有些人一到換季的時(shí)候就會(huì)感冒發(fā)燒。
How you know about it 你怎么知道的
并不是所有的病你都是提前就知道的，比如：冠狀病毒。如果這個(gè)病不是特別常規(guī)，你可以聊一聊從不知道到知道這個(gè)病的全過(guò)程。
After effect 后遺癥
有些病會(huì)伴隨著一定的后遺癥，比如：冠狀病毒。一旦有人得了此病，他可能之后的身體機(jī)能就會(huì)比常人差一些。
通過(guò)對(duì)角度的拆解和分析，現(xiàn)在你可以看到這個(gè)話題我們能聊的內(nèi)容其實(shí)很多。既然如此，你也不用害怕自己會(huì)講不夠時(shí)間或不知道怎么拓展。
現(xiàn)在我們就可以根據(jù)以上角度，同時(shí)結(jié)合具體的問(wèn)題來(lái)安排細(xì)節(jié)部分的內(nèi)容啦。
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What kind of disease you suffered from
從以上的角度來(lái)看，我們的選擇面很大。不過(guò)我會(huì)推薦比較基礎(chǔ)，同時(shí)表述難度不是很大的來(lái)供大家參考，比如：
How you know about it
A few years ago I was feeling really down and nothing I did made me feel better. ?I couldn't quite pinpoint 查明 what was wrong with me but on some days I could barely get out of bed 起床. My mum told me I should go and see a doctor and at first, I was hesitant but figured it couldn't hurt.
We went together and the doctor was very kind and after asking many questions, she explained I was suffering from depression. I was quite shocked at first but she explained many people suffer from it and it can be managed with a balance of exercise and medication.
Symptoms 癥狀
Well, a few months ago, ?I was feeling a bit under the weather 身體不舒服, I had a fever but just put it down to 歸因于 the season change. But I got worse as the days went on. ?I had the shivers 寒顫 and sweats and had zero energy. ?I went to the doctor and he told me I had caught the flu. ?He gave me some medication and told me I had to stay in bed.
Cost 花費(fèi)
Once I had a form of skin disease. At first, I thought it would heal naturally, but it got worse and my whole body was itchy 癢的 and painful. I reluctantly 不情愿地 went to the hospital. Even though I was only there for about 30 mins, it cost me an arm and a leg 很貴. As I didn’t have any health insurance, I had to pay the bill by myself.
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When you had the disease
如果你在第一問(wèn)中給出了大的時(shí)間范圍，比如：一個(gè)月前/幾年前，在第二問(wèn)題的拓展中你就需要給出更為具體的時(shí)間點(diǎn)信息。
在以往的事件類話題講解中，我都有說(shuō)明過(guò)具體時(shí)間點(diǎn)的拓展方式：Year-month-date-hour。如果你想讓時(shí)間的表述變得更為自然以及更具畫(huà)面感，你可以用“天氣”信息來(lái)代替“date”，“hour”則通過(guò)“before/after/while”的關(guān)系來(lái)表達(dá)。
Example :
I remember it was on a cold Friday night when I suddenly had a pain in my stomach. ?At first, I thought it was because I had eaten too much or I had eaten something that didn't agree with my stomach so I just turned off my phone and tried to sleep, hoping I would wake up feeling better.
However, I woke up in the middle of the night with cold sweats 冷汗 and the pain was unbearable so I woke my mum and she quickly rushed me to the hospital.
如果你在第一問(wèn)里沒(méi)有給出直接的時(shí)間，你除了可以繼續(xù)按“year-month-date-hour”的方式進(jìn)行拓展外，你也可以用“duration”來(lái)闡述它的起止時(shí)間—開(kāi)始于什么時(shí)候，結(jié)束于什么時(shí)候。
Example :
I suffered from depression when I was in high school. Everything was going well until I took my first midterm exam. I didn't do very well and my parents were very disappointed. Following that they put even more pressure on me to do well and to be honest, it was too much.
I felt myself becoming more and more depressed and I didn't know what to do. Finally, I spoke to my parents and I think they saw that I needed some professional help. ?They took me to a doctor who helped a lot.
He also talked to my parents about how too much pressure can trigger 引起 depression so they took it on board 采取建議 and didn't harass 困擾 me so much about my studies. ?A few months later I was feeling much better and I was getting good grades again.
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How you felt about it
對(duì)于得病的感受，我們可以有積極的感受，也可以從負(fù)面的點(diǎn)出發(fā)。
先設(shè)想負(fù)面的觀點(diǎn)，說(shuō)明這次得病給你帶來(lái)的損失有點(diǎn)多，比如：錯(cuò)過(guò)考試/落下功課/耽誤工作等。也有可能是通過(guò)一場(chǎng)病讓你感受到人情冷暖，比如：被嘲笑/被忽視/被冷落等。
Example :
Even though I was cured, I still felt a bit down, because during that period, I was bullied 欺凌 by other classmates just because I got the virus. They gave me so many ugly nicknames and my friends’ parents even asked them leave far away from me. I was isolated and also depressed. Now I am always alone. I don’t like to talk to others and also refuse to make new friends.
但當(dāng)然通過(guò)一次病，我們也會(huì)產(chǎn)生很多好的感受，比如：意識(shí)到健康的重要性，開(kāi)始建立好的生活習(xí)慣；感受到來(lái)自親朋好友的關(guān)愛(ài)，很溫馨等。
Example : Even though the illness made me feel absolutely terrible, I was overwhelmed by the support my family and friends showed me. ?Every day lots of people dropped by with delicious food and beautiful flowers. My best friends even came to the hospital to help me keep up to date with all the new course work and to help me revise. Thanks to them, I made a speedy recovery and when I went back to school, I managed to pass my exam with flying colors 高分. Thanks to the illness, I realized how important family and friends are.
Example :
The illness really taught me a lesson on the importance of looking after yourself. In the past, I seldom paid attention to my health, as I thought I was young and I was as fit as a fiddle 健康. But now I know I have to take care of myself more. Now every day I go to bed early and get up at 6 am. Then I do exercise for an hour. I quit eating junk food. Instead, I cook for myself every day. With a lot of effort, I am much healthier than before.
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參考答案：【得過(guò)的一種病】
What kind of disease you suffered from
Depression is very common not only among adults but also among teenagers and something I suffered from a while back. I didn't actually know what depression was until the doctor told me. I was shocked and also felt very anxious. Then I started receving treatment and realized I could manage it carefully with exercise and medication.
When you had the disease
It started when I was in high school. Everything was going well until I took my first midterm exam. I didn't do very well and my parents were very disappointed. Following that they put even more pressure on me to do well and to be honest, it was too much. I felt myself becoming more and more depressed and I didn't know what to do. Finally, I spoke to my parents and I think they saw that I needed some professional help. ?They took me to a doctor who helped a lot.
He also talked to my parents about how too much pressure can trigger 引起 depression so they took it on board 采取建議 and didn't harass 困擾 me so much about my studies. ?A few months later I was feeling much better.
How you felt about it
It was a really bad time in my life. Because of depression, I got behind at school but and for me, it was my friends. They were amazing. They rallied around 團(tuán)結(jié)在周圍 and made me feel so much better and tried to help me keep up to date with all my school work. I am not sure i could have done it without them.
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